Dear Cara

• Artist: Death for Wonderland
• Description: My friend Cara committed suicide about 2 months ago. This is a song I wrote in memory of her.
  R.I.P. Cara Weber.
• Date: 01/10/2009
• Tags: dear cara weber suicide song

Your life was short, playing lost and found,
Now you lay there, six feet underground,
Why’d you leave, Why’d you have to go,
My friend Cara, I miss you so,
You were my friend, you were so dear,
Now I’m still in shock, that you’re no longer here,

Dear Cara, You were so strong,
Dear Cara, But it didn’t last long,
Dear Cara, Couldn’t you see,
That all you needed was hope,
But now you've been set free.

Your friends are still here, crying over you,
Here we stand, there’s nothing we can do,
Why were you so selfish, to go that far,
To not let us help you, to bear your scars,
We want you back, wish you didn’t leave,
But all we can do, is sit here and grieve.

Dear Cara, You were so strong,
Dear Cara, But it didn’t last long,
Dear Cara, Couldn’t you see,
That all you needed was hope,
But now you've been set free.

You made me smile,
You stayed for a while,
But then you strayed,
And we're not okay.

Dear Cara, You were so strong,
Dear Cara, But it didn’t last long,
Dear Cara, Couldn’t you see,
That all you needed was hope,
But now you've been set free.

Dear Cara, You were so strong,
Dear Cara, But it didn’t last long,
Dear Cara, Couldn’t you see,
That all you needed was hope,
But now you've been set free.

Comments

[BiggieSmall123]

That was very sad.
usually when someone tries to write these stuff, they write bs around to make it sound even sadder- but it only makes it sounds stupid.

BUT THIS>?! is raw emotion. Direct to the point of what has happened.

RIP CARA.


<3 5/5

[Phinagin2000]

i don't see many songs on the arena; that was very good!
p.s. i'm sorry about ur friend sad

[FMA-Dream theives]

this is so sad it makes me want to cry
i cant feel your pain and i hope i never will, but your stronger than i could hope to be at a time like that, i would be unmovable indefinitely, im just glad you stayed strong and honored your friend

[The Fallen 19]

It's good

[jgirl39]

The rhymes in the beginning sound forced, but it gets better later on. It would help if you added a metaphor in verse two.

[Gravetye]

I think you wrote this well. And I'm really sorry you lost a friend.

[Echonance]

Good work. I apologize for your loss, but everyone feels them eventually. The song-
It was written confidently, and clean; unfortunately, I feel as though your rhyme scheme was slightly off. 4.5.