- a girl named onix tadikichi sits down at the kitchen,her life passes before her eyes as she inhaled the darkness,the walls closed in on her as she rushed to the stairs to her room,the stairs seemed to be going further every time she took a step! she crashes into the couch as she gets dizzy,and she asks herself "why me?" as her mom tells her shes going to school this year....
- by Kishin_Mistress |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/29/2008 |
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- Title: death by school
- Artist: Kishin_Mistress
- Description: this is about a girl who hates school so muchsshe sees things
- Date: 12/29/2008
- Tags: poetry insanity
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xXxblack3starxXx - 07/26/2012
- Haaa that girl is me xD
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- Jessie_Bitchez_ii - 02/14/2012
- lol...funny poem...
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- Kishin_Mistress - 12/11/2009
- aww,thankies >w<
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- Hikaru Ichiro - 12/04/2009
- you did an excellent job! anyone below this comment who disagrees...haha why are they one to talk?? honestly, great job! its really cute and it matches the pic perfectly!5/5
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- ShadowIzzy - 12/04/2009
- great o-o
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- Kishin_Mistress - 10/08/2009
- ty for telling me how u think it needs to be changed,but its only fair tht i say,it was my 1st poem entry EVER
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- westernsnog - 10/08/2009
- The format needs to be fixed so that there are stanzas...and more detailing...however i love the idea behind it and the rough draft is really excellent!
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