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All alone...
I feel so broken...
I miss your laugh...
I miss your smile...
I'm so alone, that I'm broken...
When you're gone,
I don't feel the same...
I can't be strong...
When you're gone,
you take a part of me with you...
A piece of me is missing,
I'm falling apart....
I'm broken when you're gone...
But when you return...
I'll be fixed....
- by Self Tragedy |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/26/2008 |
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- Title: Broken
- Artist: Self Tragedy
- Description: In the mood for writting... This is what I came up with....
- Date: 12/26/2008
- Tags: broken
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Comments (4 Comments)
- karie95 - 07/21/2009
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i like it.
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- Tseko the Living Shadow - 01/02/2009
- very good...
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- Flower Keeper Sloth - 12/27/2008
- I love it. Very heart felt! You can tell it comes from deep inside.
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- Nikki4815 - 12/26/2008
- very nice, but maybe you could edit it a bit, change your word choice, add a few more lines, and it could be really great! 3/5, but I smell a great poem on the way. If you do take my advice, I'd like to see it when you're finished, if you'd send me a PM to let me know or something...Rate back? Check out my gallery.
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