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dont help me anymore
i dont need your lies
you feed off of my failures
and release the bad karma to me
i die and see you with her
the girl i despise
i hate you so much
i will meet you in hell where i will kill your soul
- by Twilight_Juliet101 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/25/2008 |
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- Title: dont help
- Artist: Twilight_Juliet101
- Description: random
- Date: 12/25/2008
- Tags: dont help
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Skyrim sucks - 06/23/2009
- I don't like the look of this.
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- EmoBananasStoleMyHomework - 01/29/2009
- well, "raziel is mine", POEMS HAVE NO BOUNDARIES. there is no specific rule about poetry, your just supposed to say what you want with no one looking down at you because of "rules" of poetry. well, F**K THOSE RULES! no one gives a devils soul about capital letters. gaia is a CHAT website where people use things like "omg" and "lol" or "lmao"!!! we arent banned if we cuss or use lower care letters , its a pg-13 website! geez...
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- pondsgame - 01/19/2009
- wow
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- Raziel is mine - 12/25/2008
- Unoriginal, disjointed, and where the hell are your capital letters? Something tells me you missed them out for reasons other than artistic license. This is more of a half-assed rant than a poem.
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