Quiet one...

• Artist: iiLil_emo_PuppeTii
• Description: i wrote this about myself... the oh quiet one is me...
  just read this please... leave coments...
• Date: 12/15/2008
• Tags: quiet

She weres her heart safety pinned to her backpack...
her backpack is all that she knows...
shacked down by strangers who glances...
can cripple the heart and deveor the soul...
she used to talk your head off...
none stop laughter...
now shes quiet...
quiet as a mouse...
what has happened...
her friends wonder...
but they know...
they can hear the fights...
they listen from the outside...
they watch...
why dont they so something...
she is crying...
as her own father shakes her and yells in her face...
she walks to the bus stop...
they ask what has happened...
only to see her stone face does not give a response...
what is her next move they think...
give her one split second and she'll end her life...
when her friend trys to get in her access is granted...
as she walks in her friends tunnel of pain...
she sees ever grusome thing shes gone through...
she has told nobody...
she talks to her friend...
but not dry unmeaningfull words...
they were from the heart...
listen to me oh quiet one! she says...
look at me oh quiet one... and understand this...
you are not alone in your tunnel of pain...
my dad does the same...
but i have put up a thick wall oh quiet one...
please...
dont not let your life go just yet...
come to me oh quiet one...

Comments

[roaringtman]

went through it a little too.
things always get better and there is always things to look forward to. Think positive and try to be happy.

[1randomsinger]

i went threw it to i'm here for you oh quiet one

[Kuma Naru]

Wow. Im sorry that your dad does that. I cant tell you that I have been through that, but if you are going through this then maybe its best that you tell someone before it escalates. After all, many people in the world would miss you. Hope evrything works out for you. Great job, hope to read more from you!

[MyHeartsTaken]

and up and tell!

[MyHeartsTaken]

jewel...does ur dad abuse u?? u have to tell me.. my dad abused me so my mom sent me to foster care before he did something tragic..then my dad was picking up his life before he died and my mom was a tragic whore prostitute before she died..adn u know my mom was one cause my dad left her at such an early age 20 i think and just after my mom had my bro he was almost 2 in 2 months we went to foster care.....and member wat my profile says at the top.....and plus if ur being abused then u need to st

[Damian rane]

pooor you cry