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i am waiting silently on a rock,
waiting for my parents with there key,
becase i lost my key for the lock at my door...
- by XII_Ikable_IIX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: I lost my key...
- Artist: XII_Ikable_IIX
- Description: I hope you ppl like my poem i just started to write poems so i am kinda not good plz comment this poem.:oops::oops::oops:
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: lost
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Comments (3 Comments)
- xIVooDooIx - 07/21/2009
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well, you have an idea and subject.
dont worry, you'll get better as you keep making more.
search me in the arenas under poetry and lyrics. comment my work please. - Report As Spam
- xXxKiss_Me_GoodbyexXx - 12/19/2008
- er.. kinda plain! try adding rhymes, and more lines! 3/5
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- Crystal_Meth13 - 12/16/2008
- wWhat door? It needs more detail
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