Honey, Darling, Sweetheart

• Artist: Invalid Human
• Description: This poem was just thought out of nowhere, but I was thinking to submit this into a contest, so please tell me If I shouldnt, or what I could improve on.. Thanks! :D
• Date: 12/12/2008
• Tags: honey darling sweetheart

Hold me tight honey
Hold me so tight
Please hold it sweety
Let us not start a fight

Think about me darling
Think about me all day
Don’t worry honey
From you I am not running away

Guide me sweetie
Guide me through this blind world
Treat me honey
Treat me like your little girl

Solve me sweetie
Solve me like your mistery puzzle
I need you darling
Where is my warm cuddle?

I want you honey
I want your dazzling smiles
I need you darling
How far are you, how many miles?

I wish honey
I wish you were with me
I dreamt darling
I dreamt we were free

I need to feel you darling
I need to feel your warm touch
I hate it darling
I hate that I love you so much

Comments

[kiwijian_01]

yo dude....wow...das reallly cool...speachless

[Joeybear1993]

It is an awesome poem! So beautiful!

[xkunoichixkimix]

this is quite beautiful.... to tell you the truth this makes me think of my love! THIS IS GREAT IF YOU CAN BRING SUCH FEELINGS LIKE THAT FROM PEOPLE LIKE ME THAN YOU SHOULD DEFFINATELY ENTER IT OH YEAH 5/5

[Invalid Human]

Thank you so much! biggrin

[BeautifulDisasterrO_o]

awhh. [:
theres a tear in my eye.
love itt.<3
yupp, you should enter it. lol.
cute. comment one of mine???