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if you live for thrill what do u live for??
if you live for love what do u live for??
if you live for passion what do u live for??
if you live for death what do u live for if you live for death??
if you can live forever what do u live for??
- by monkeylov3r28 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/09/2008 |
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- Title: what do u live for
- Artist: monkeylov3r28
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- Date: 12/09/2008
- Tags: live
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Klaora - 12/20/2008
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I can answer all of those questions:
First-thrill
Second-love
Third-Passion
Get the point? This is pointless.
ALSO, PLEASE TAKE THE TIME TO SPELL THE WORD 'you'. CAPITALIZE THE FIRST LETTER OF A LINE! ONE QUESTION MARK WILL SUFFICE! PUT SOME ACTUAL THOUGHT INTO A WORK OF ART! (I do not even deem it so!)
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- SilentxPuppet - 12/17/2008
- my bad i forgot to rate this
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- Masupups - 12/11/2008
- Interesting... I could honestly respond mentally to this. :3
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 12/11/2008
- If you do not have the time to write an actual poem, and not this ******** worthless mess of unintelligent and poorly typed trash, then don't waste the 100 gold postig it, here. You just wasted my time. 0/5.
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- bill357 - 12/11/2008
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A real deep meaning in so few words.
Thank you for sharing. - Report As Spam
- mandas_world09 - 12/10/2008
- this is interesting...its short and i have nothing against that but it just seems kinda simple and like there wasnt 2 much thpught put into it. its good just not great. 3/5
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