Cold

• Artist: Heart Pandemic
• Description: It was really cold the other day and this is how I felt.
  Enjoy.
  =]
• Date: 12/09/2008
• Tags: cold

Cold
Cold seeping into my bones,
chilling my blood
So cold, so cold
It begins to hurt, sting me.

What's that?
A warm touch
on my hand,
Is that...someone else's hand?
Yes! yes it is!
They pull me out of the
Depths of the cold,
And embrace me into a
warm world.

Then, I'm falling again
into the cold depths
only to return,
once again.

Comments

[Jokiel Dark Skull]

No offense ,but im with miss elmo it kinda sucks

[Sukuhi]

I'm finding it rather difficult to find decent poetry in the Arenas lately...it's pretty good for a free verse, though usually synonyms for the words 'warm' and 'cold' might make it more interesting to read. Otherwise, I give you a four out of five.

[poetofevil]

cool. smile

[lil miss elmo]

to tell u the truth it sucks