Death by hanging

• Artist: bloodygirl17
• Description: I wrote this because my friend hanged herself yesterday.........the funeral is Monday.
• Date: 12/06/2008
• Tags: death hanging

Handcuffed
Locked in a rope
Looking at the others looking at me
Hanging there
In a lifeless posture
How rude of me
I could fix it
"Death by hanging!"
Handcuffed
Locked in a rope
Death by hanging
No blood to be seen
Eyes open
Looking at the others looking at me
Death by hanging

Comments

[obiyakasu o kage]

if your not strong all your freinds will eventually die...its your cross to bear, im sorry for your freind but remember if your not strong who will be ^^

[Perfectly Drugged]

I'm so sorry about your friend. I enjoy your poem and I like the repetiveness. It is a bit hard to understand though. I know what it's like to have a friend commit sucide.

[Mischiefwulf]

im very sorry that your friend commited suicide. I would be devasted if a friend of mine did that. Im also very sorry to say i dont like this very much. I know you probably tried very hard to make it great it just lacks creativness and any real purpose.

[FaLlInG oUt Of ToDaY]

im so srry bout ur friend but i really like ur poem!

[2009 helper]

sometimes we have to admit sometimes we want to be dead... i feel the pain

[XxxSexGoddess411xxX]

this is soo sad i wish i could help but i also love this poem...sorry again

[Demon Imp Queen]

im so srry but i like the poem