A Wedding I'll Never Get

• Artist: Vampiric Ivory
• Description: there are something in life we may not get to enjoy but there are someof the best things we wished for that go wrong and we never get to enjoy at all
• Date: 12/01/2008
• Tags: wedding never

A ring with out its shine a cake with out its flavor, a dress that has never been worn and chapel that never was use, friends and family that didn’t get invited, a honey moon that’ll never be…a wedding I’ll never see and I’ll never get now that you left me, the days go by, I’m all alone, wishing you were by my side, I dream a dream I wish would come true, but now I know that will never be so, I’ve lost my hope my will as well, but one thing I know that my heart and soul is always yours to hold.

Comments

[JeSuSrOx94]

same feeling forever...since my true love has turned me down...so many times...it makes me cry...he likes me and I'm in love...but some reason...he says NO! forever and ever...

[luvergirl1000]

if this is wat u think...me have tat same feelin crying

[iBrightScales]

Well, this is much better than most of your poems, but it's still horrible.
Grammatical errors, spelling errors and it's a bit of a run-on.
However, unlike the rest of your poetry, this one holds promise.
Revise it, rewrite it, and post it again.

[Faudo]

5/5
dont hit me xD