Pain is my lover

• Artist: the silver belladonna
• Description: Not yet finished. It's a gruesome poem. That says a lot aout many things that occur in our world.
• Date: 11/30/2008
• Tags: pain lover gruesome insanity

The lightning strikes me
yes the moment is right
So they all can see
how i hide my fright

Let my heart be
rip it too shreds
and make a bloody tea
turning your heads

I want you to feel
all of my pain
Your face a color of teal
What have i got to gain

needles in my eyes
sorrow tingling through
can you hear my cries
or do you still not have a clue

Nails in my feet
depression rapes me
the sight of my blood is sweet
yet none of it holds the key..............................

Comments

[Ethereal Space]

Kinda reminds me of crusifiction, I kinda like hmmm how about a 3? I'll give you a three, I want to see it finished tho

[Frisky Shadow]

I find it funny how this is ALL one sentnce. Very simple as well, I'm sorry 'll have to go hardcore on your a** and give you a two. -only because I like the name.

[Katrika]

Morbid, but good. 4/5.

[Jeyrin]

I like it!! 4/5. Rate back? The entry is called "Unspoken Message", and I posted it in my mule, so it will have a different name. THIS IS AMAZING!