Tattered and Torn

• Artist: dreamweaver33
• Description: I am sitting tattered and torn writing this poem. I had to give up my first horse and like the song says the first cut is the deepest. I love Bailey till the mountains come down. I miss him already and it hasn't been eight hours. I think this poem helped though.
• Date: 11/29/2008
• Tags: heart love sadness horses

my heart has been teared
right out of my chest
and is lying on the floor
beating to death

my happiness was stolen
and only sadness is left
the light has been doused
by the blackest of breathe

my courage has died
along with soul
my eyes are tired
my words are weak

my heart has been teared
my happiness stolen
my soul and my courage
are found with the meek

for my friend
my love my baby is gone
he loved me always
as i love him

who knows if i will live through the pain
and break through the drowning rain
but if i don't and find my way to heaven
at least the pain will dim

Comments

[Sparkplugo]

ah u lost ur horsey oh well who gives a damn lol 5/5

[dreamweaver33]

Thanks everyone for the comments. I am feeling a little better. Thanks again.

[Fijuku]

LOVE the poem

[Panda Luver6]

thats good. feel better 5/5

[Firemarksman]

That's a very sad poem. Always remember that your family and friends will be there for you to help you through this. I hope you feel better soon.