Natural Drug

• Artist: Aziin Z
• Description: A poem inspired by my friend.
  Don't get the wrong idea, he didn't take drugs.
  What he said to me inspired me.
  Oh, and try and find out wat i'm talking about, and put it in ur comment, if u can, please and thank you.
  well hope you Gaians enjoy.
  (by the way, if anyone is interested, I've written a couple poems in my journal.
  It'd be nice if someone reads them and comments, thank you if u do)
  
• Date: 11/28/2008
• Tags: natural drug anger rage blinding

Natural Drug

Streaks of blood red ruby,
Against the dark sapphire hue,
Rage as fierce as a living wildfire,
Engulfing the most calming waves,
Within the feeble mind.

Hatred of burning passion,
Blinds the weary trembling soul,
With the worst cynical natural drug,
Forcing out the carefully formed,
Facade of the humane.

Comments

[Marionette_Mentation]

i like this one also. the descriptive details within it create an image that is dark with misery.

[Violexant]

Both stanzas have a cycle of emotions. And the whole thing sounds like a difficult riddle. Not sure if that's what you were aiming for, but I like it.

[shadyeclipse]

nice. that was awesome!

[SakuraIchigoRyu]

Gorgeous. The imagery was absolutely splendid, and the way it was put together was wonderful.

[swagga jerks]

sound goods

[Luis D Rodriguez]

Sounds like u talkin bout love in a dif. perspective to throw people off nd make em think, but i aint sure..but yo, datz whatz up

[Jin Z]

One word: Awesome.