If you were here.....

• Artist: Lady Alice Road Kamelot
• Description: I really miss my friend, so I wrote this.
• Date: 11/27/2008
• Tags: were here

If you were here by my side,
There'd be no reason to cry.
If you were here holdng my hand,
There'd be no room to be sad.
If you were here comforting me,
I could never be lonely.
If you were here giving me care,
I'd follow you, no matter where.
If you were here, satisfyingly close,
That is enough reason to toast.
If you were here close enough to touch,
For me that would be enough.
If you were here with me, stuck in time,
Always with me, forever mine.
If you were here, my dear,
Oh, if only you were here......

Comments

[DDrox316]

I feel like some of the rhymes are a bit of a stretch and the rhythm could use some work, but I like the idea behind this.

[T3CHN0_W13RD0]

TOTALLY AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!

[nasralraheeb]

this is exactly how i felt about my wife for the last 5 months, while i was deployed. VERY GOOD POEM