Let your Hate Shine...

• Artist: Killvin
• Description: I wrote this in a fit of rage cuz internet wouldn't work... And yes, it's very... Ummm... u'll find out...
• Date: 11/25/2008
• Tags: your hate shine

Slit their throats,
Watch them die,
Let them bleed,
Let them cry.

Let them cry out in pain,
kick their living corpse out into the rain.
Stab them quickly, turn the blade...
Let them feel the rush of hate.

Don't let them get away,
Hang their body on display,
Let them be the example for all,
then cut the rope, let them fall.

Keep them alive just a bit longer,
let the hate you feel grow even stronger.
Pound on them, kick, punch, spit,
Even after their throat you have slit.

Bury the body, hide the shame...
Find someone else to blame.
You're done for now, until next time,
When you feel the urge to let your hate shine.

Thanks for reading, I know it's demented, but hey... I was pissed... lol

Comments

[DeCrazySheep]

Hmm.. You think that's dement? Try the fact I imagened this being sung durring a game of 'patty cake' or jump rope.
God loves the little children.

[Yami Kisei]

dude...this is freakin awsome,,,...lol yami likes it

[Foxy_Vampiress]

hey just to let you know my computer is a pice of crap too. It is my lifeline. This poem yes at times get really pissed of at alot of things. It is good at times to be angry. Once long ago my first divorce i pruned this hedge. Every branch was my ex husbands head i pictured it in my mind. I cut and cut and several years later no flowers as result. LOL

[Killvin]

^ ^ Thank you!

[The Magical Mellophone]

Good job, the pacing was great and the flow worked well. 5 from me.

[Killvin]

Actually you can, it just might not be accurate...

[fatmasterson]

The comment was after reading your poem genius. You can't criticize someone before you read their work.