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If you were not here
I dont know what i would do
I would commit suicide without you
You are my drug
I am addicted to you
Your kindness has opened my eyes
More importantly my heart
Without you i would still be lost in my memorys
Without you i would not be here
Without you i would not exciste
These are the reasons why i need you
And more
I have a certan feeling towards you
A feeling of security and a feeling of love
Without you
I would be nothing
This is how much you mean to me
- by -Dark-Light_Memmories- |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/22/2008 |
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- Title: Without You
- Artist: -Dark-Light_Memmories-
- Description: something that would happen without the guy i truly do love.
- Date: 11/22/2008
- Tags: without
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Hekibel - 12/01/2008
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It's good, but can I correct the spelling errors? Sorry, I'm practically OCD about it....
*memories, *exist, *certain
:3 Okay, back to the poem. It's got good feeling in it, and it speaks fairly honestly. Not too much flow, but that's just a style. smile Fairly well done. 4 - Report As Spam
- Shominoki - 11/27/2008
- thats gorgeous 5/5
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- Ichigo_419 - 11/27/2008
- Wow 5/5 that really came from the heart(it sounds like it)
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