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-Written for a friend Good friend.
Watching you act, hiding your emotions,
Behind a mask no one can penetrate.
Trying to keep the world from knowing how you really feel.
Unable to comprehend the meaning of life.
Hiding physcological pain by causing physical pain.
Even if you bleed.
Guarding your thoughts from the world,
Trying to understand them yourself.
Always looking at the ground,
Feeling like life is useless.
Please, for me, let your mask slip.
For you've held it far too long.
Confide in me what you wish to,
But do not let me be a burden.
Don't waste your life, sacrificing yourself.
Because im not the only one who cares.
Let me remove the mask
And feel the pain you do.
I may not be able to comprehend it,
But I can try to dull the sting.
Confide in me, your emotions.
Show me what is making your life so unbearable.
I can attempt at lifting your burden,
Or are you too strong to cry?
- by jkfdklfsajksca |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/08/2008 |
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- Title: Too Strong To Cry
- Artist: jkfdklfsajksca
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Description:
Yeah, this is my first entry...
I wrote this poem, thinking of my bf..
And so this is what I wrote about him and how I feel...
Please go easy on me.
My first time ><
[All the poems I have written are in my journal. Including this one.] - Date: 11/08/2008
- Tags: strong love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- TheAutumnDandy - 08/20/2009
- Heyy. This is my old file, and I just want to let you people know that to read more of my poems, please visit my commenting account!
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- Decepticon_Lyric - 07/06/2009
- </3 Nices poem.
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- maydaymouse - 04/02/2009
- It's wonderful. You must really be a good freind to care about this person so much. 5/5
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- Demonization Razor - 01/03/2009
- Thats me!!!!! biggrin
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- Kashi2Kashi - 12/24/2008
- This is so awesome! I have a friend just like this! I'm making her read this!
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- ii_Rawr_FreeHugsii - 12/24/2008
- wow it's very good
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- Whookie - 12/22/2008
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i agree with lacy it is good...idk wat to say about it thats wrong
i like how u did the first section...^^ - Report As Spam