Kids

• Artist: Kaine Soren
• Description: A short poem about a woman who has trouble with her son.
  
  Written from the womans point of view.
• Date: 11/02/2008
• Tags: kids poem children love kids

"I tried to teach my child with words,
but all he heared where sudden blurs."

"I tried to teach my child with books ,
but he only gave me puzzled looks."

"I have tried and tried and tried and tried,
How shall i teach this child!?" She cried.

"Then into my hand he placed the key,"
"Come" He said. "Play with me"

Comments

[Faded_Tattoo]

Very well done, nice transition, nice timing, very true and precise meaning... i like where you heads at smile

[Kaine Soren]

so... Who likes it. Be honest please.