At the Edge of Tomorrow

• Artist: Celestine Firestorm
• Description:
• Date: 10/27/2008
• Tags: flowers twilight edge moment dreamy

Chromatic summer daisies stretch toward the paling tangerine sun
Their tilted stems sway away from phantom shadows
Whilst spectres dance in the ever-increasing beclouded twilight
Luminescence hovers betwixt misty petals
Blossoms grasp for final moments of radiance
Trying desperately to create a vestige of day to get through the night

Comments

[Dragons_rule_the_sky]

i agree with tomotenshi. It was short (but still good) and the imagrey had a very surreal lining. I love the last line. very good.

[Tomotenshi]

Too short to really critique but I enjoyed the surreal style and the imagery. I'd love to read more. Have you written anything else? Feel free to PM me if you are so inclined. Thank you.