5 things i hate about you

• Artist: UNKNOW dude ii
• Description: sorry 4 da cliche =P lol
• Date: 10/25/2008
• Tags: 5thingsihateaboutyou

I love when we're alone
You become a close friend
But when someone else comes by, I’m invisible
Our friendship ends

You make showers look deep
You always went for the good looking guys
You never see past their faces
You don't see what’s on the inside

You think you know me
You haven’t got a clue what goes on inside my brain
You’re supposed to be this great friend
And yet you have trouble with my name

You boss me around
And regretfully I obey
I can't help myself
I wish to be stronger I pray

One last thing I hate about you
Something I hate more than all the above
I hate you the most because
You’re the one I love

Comments

[Angeladr7]

I liked it. and as far as the girl in the poem, i think you deserve much better.

[jummpy117]

I know how you fell.

[Tetsuya Akiya]

It's really goood.
nice.
keeep on writing

[myshatteredlittleheart]

its sad but so true.you certainly captured the reality of this part of life.if that makes any sense.i liked it a lot.