Mysterious

• Artist: Patriot_Raiden
• Description: small poem i wrote at school...was thinking bout someone
• Date: 10/22/2008
• Tags: mysterious

Mysterious is your name,
the way you talk smoothly
the way you walk beautifly
the way your eyes bright up,
is all a mystery to me.

Mysterious is your name,
the way you feel fascinates me
the way you think controlls me
the way your shiny hair moves,
It all seems like a deep sleep to me

Mysterious is your name,
looking in your eyes brings confusion
what u've been through i can't describe
you blow my mind, i can't deny your beauty.
But even though,you still remain a mystery.

Comments

[western_eyes]

the line "But even though,you still remain a mystery." doesn't make sense to me, or maybe i just don't get it? anyway, i thought you had some nice lines in here. it's a pretty poem.