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Saddness can over run
And Tears will roll.
Come out your Eyes
But from your Soul.
You must never of really cared
Now just open your mouth and share.
This knowledge of time and Rythm of Ryme
And let it roll within your mind
The water of dead souls
You take a dive.
And very soon
Your not alive.
Then to them, your soul you will give
Then you really start to live.
I have wrotten so many songs
Even though I have no idea where i belong.
I listen ever so silently
Then to put it on mute.
And look around and realize
That life isn't so cute
- Title: DEAD
- Artist: Kitten254
- Description: my crying darkness
- Date: 10/20/2008
- Tags: dead
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Comments (5 Comments)
- OtakuGothGirl - 07/09/2009
- That's cool. ^_^
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- TOrCh SCoRcH - 04/16/2009
- once again great job! Keep up the great work!
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- Kitten254 - 03/13/2009
- this is very old work!!!! i didnt except people to comment and if they did it would say needs work.....but wow....THANKS!!!............it does need a little work at the end though......^^
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- Adumbral_Abyss - 03/13/2009
- I agree with Dark Stars... The rhyme scheme that you had is absolutely beautiful! I especially like the first stanza.
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- 290DarkStars - 03/10/2009
- Im suprised that I am the first to tell you what a great poem that this is! it might need a little more of a conclusion on the head... but MAN! you hit the nail in the head! good illustration, it brought the invisionment right to my mind... good job kitten! keep it up. mrgreen
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