not gonna cry

• Artist: fabulouseme
• Description: hi this is prety much a true song about how i feel sometimes.it could also be a poem.umm this is a sad song encouraging yourself to not burst out everytime and to be strong.it tells you to not cry but to tell yourself it's ok and the pain will go away, it's ok and this will past.
• Date: 10/18/2008
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a brand new year with the same old tears
again a sad song asking what is wrong
just a scratch in the heart and then it split apart
i've been waiting a while 4 an actual smile
like most times im all alone in the dark
made a promise that im gonna make a brand new start
gonna make new friends and they dont have to be trend
just have to be true and will last forever too
my heart wont die and i wont cry
im not gonna die n im not gonna cry
im not gonna cry but learn to live
this just life and sometimes it may hurt
im not going to cry
im not gonna cry
cuz i wont die and thats why i wont cry

Comments

[Jayleena]

It has a good theme behind it but i think you tried to hard to rhyme. And you sounded a little redundant at some parts, but otherwise its good.