Lyrics

• Artist: snow_nightmare
• Description: +`This was supposed to be a lyrics but apparently I don't know how to play any instrument and that's why it is entitled as is. I made this because I wanted to help the little sister of my "ex-best friend". I never really thought that I actually made something beautiful for someone I hated so much. So, I hope you guys like it. :]
• Date: 10/18/2008
• Tags: lyrics

LYRICS

Embrace me and heal my pain
I doubt it 'cause you brought the rain.
You lied to me with curse and blame
You promised me and now you're a shame.

I hate you for what you've done
And now all the memories are gone;
You betrayed the one who cares for you
Right now she's bleeding and forgetting you.

These teardrops will mend my heart
And no one again can tear it apart;
I told you to take good care of it
But all you did is hurt and break it.

I hate you for who you are
Your words, your promises
Your silence, Your love
And all of the above.

Comments

[snow_nightmare]

+`Mr. MCjackdaripper - Thank you for the advice. Appreciated. :]

[snow_nightmare]

+`thank you.
I'm glad you like it. :]

[CottenCandyGal101]

5/5

[SilvertongueSagittarius]

too simple of rhymes and a rough flow. try throwing in a more powerful message with a ridiculously over the top metaphor as well.(i.e. " you tossed my heart in the garbage disposal/ the day you declined my marriage proposal" wink that just came to me but u get what i mean. neway, it needs work.2/5

[red1496]

omg im nearly 2 tears it brings bak good nd bad memories wow im putting this in my faves nd 5/5!!!!!

[Teayo]

beautiful words nice format 5/5

[kaoru-pengu]

good one..i can really feel how u feel