9-11

• Artist: Epic Blue Duck
• Description: this is a poem i wrote about 9-11. i hope u like it.
• Date: 10/12/2008
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A peaceful calm lay on the land;
A new day we adore.
No one knew what was to come
On this bright September morn.

But darkness came so suddenly;
Destruction was at hand.
A day that turned to tragedy:
Destruction on our land.

Shock and anger filled the air,
And sadness filled our hearts.
A time of healing must begin;
A renewal, we must start.

Attack on America was what they said;
They sought out to defeat.
But as long as hope is still alive,
This nation won't be beat.

Awake to danger America;
Your children are filled with rage.
Awake to danger America;
Through tears, a war you'll wage.

Comments

[xI Pumped Up Kicks Ix]

thnxs for the comments everyone^^
it is greatly appreciated

[GMOD106]

Thats deep, it gets a perfect 5 out of 5

[Codythedarkkillo]

Wow.Great job,and mexicantacos2003, watch what you say,this poem had nothing to do with what you said.So go be a little b***h-allot some where else.But besides him,I agree with everyone.Good job,I hope you publish it some day.

[xI Pumped Up Kicks Ix]

thnxs to everyone who commented me and rated this^^.
its me in a different account.
the original was hacked
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thanks everyone.

[PeachPride21]

this poem is, to put it bluntly, fantastic. you manged to turn a horrible incedent into a wonderful poem, great job.

[mexicantacos2003]

good poem
rip all the people who died on 9-11

[XxDragonXUchihaxX]

haha thts my pal! also my friend has other stuff in arena guys check it out!