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You and I
Freed into the sky,
Sanctioned and Unioned
We collide
You and I,
Freed of our souls
Untouched; on hold
From those who wouldn't release us,
From the Hell below
You and I,
Freed are our minds
Unhindered - Unscathed,
Away from the aura's that creep
Energized beneath
You and I,
Freed of our eyes
Leaving the beauty that tries-
-to bring us back to earth,
So that we may disconnect
You and I,
Freed from our bodies,
With corpses buried
We leave this world;
Mourning adjourned
...and with happy thoughts,
We disperse
- by Mecca Against Reality |
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- | Submitted on 10/03/2008 |
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- Title: You and I, Free At Last
- Artist: Mecca Against Reality
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Description:
I wrote this poem today, when the words were jumbled in my head. It is about two people (lovers, friends, family?) that have finally found each other, to only go through the hardship which almost separates them.
Comments would be greatly appreciated. - Date: 10/03/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- gokushin540 - 11/03/2008
- i like this one.
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- XxEmoBlondexX - 10/04/2008
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Lovely
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- the_ashen_child - 10/04/2008
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that's really interesting
it kinda makes me think of a RomeoXJuliette kind of thing
(is that to crony of me?) smile - Report As Spam
- gabbel - 10/03/2008
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OMG I LOVE IT!
once again you never fail to write something that ppl and i like to read
amazing job!
keep writing! - Report As Spam
- It all gets Reversed - 10/03/2008
- Gorgeous. I love it. And it can be so true that after so long some things don't work out, or almost don't.
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- This Accident - 10/03/2008
- You did extremely well in this poem. Good job! ^^
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- iBrightScales - 10/03/2008
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I love it <3
WRITE MORE DANG IT!! - Report As Spam
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