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Black is the colour of the soul I will keep
Dark is the night when fearless I will reap
Protect me my bloodline for in you I place my trust
As sweet hearts are devoured blood runs cold, as it must
The task I’ve been placed with the life I must end
For whom I will take it their death I will send
I can’t leave now but I won’t take you just yet
For hiding in the shadows are your mistakes, pay our debt
For where I have been
For what I have done
These dark little secrets
Burn like the sun
I can’t see the end
But its not there I know
For where I have been
For where I will go
Allies I’ve no need for, for only shadows will stay
I look in to the darkness but light keeps me at bay
My patience is unending but boy me your pissing
Tonight will be and ending cause I’m so sick of your constant prissing
This darkness in my eyes that controls my very mind
Has seeped into my heart but don’t worry cause I’m kind
To whom I call my heart from and still it with hands cold
Of answers death I call on hide me from their cruel hold
For where I have been
For what I have done
These dark little secrets
Burn like the sun
I can’ t see the end
But its not there I know
For where I have been
To where I will go
Oh how I hate you with the passion of my soul
Run little schemer for your sins make me roll
Come little sinner for this life has ended its time
Will you find life after death cause I know you’ve taken what’s mine
Cry ha I scoff you with that pillow by your head
But worry not small wonderer this night will see you dead
Little boy I hurt you harder for the pain of her to me
You can slowly understand that your life will have nothing new to see
For where I have been
For what I have done
There dark little secrets
Burn like the sun
I can’t see the end
But its not there I know
For where I have been
For where I will go
- by injected_explosion |
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- | Submitted on 10/03/2008 |
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- Title: whispers
- Artist: injected_explosion
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Description:
so I wrote this out of boredom one day and decided i wanted some opinons on it. so please don't worry about my feelings and tell me what you think.
also don't get mad at me because i like to rhyme. plus if you can think of a better title please tell me. - Date: 10/03/2008
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Inf3rnalAng3l - 10/03/2008
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Its very forced -.- ,but the little repetitive lines like
"For where I have been
For what I have done
There dark little secrets
Burn like the sun"
save it, ah! check your punctuation as well XD - Report As Spam
- Summer Fallwinterspring - 10/03/2008
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Honestly?
What's the point?
Yeah, you're so morbid, and you have secrets. I've heard it before- I've heard it all before. There's nothing wrong with poetry that isn't happy and sunshine- but for god's sake, can't you make it original? - Report As Spam
- ESHA_221 - 10/03/2008
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its very deep nd i love it
keep it up dude - Report As Spam
- infinite_personalities101 - 10/03/2008
- This is really good! very morbid....but awesome! 5/5
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- minimel1 - 10/03/2008
- whoa dark...i like the rhythm too
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