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A scream in the night
drip drop drip drop
The eyes of the cold one piercing my soul
drip drop drip drop
Fangs shining in the moon's light
drip drop drip drop
A puddle of red, growing
drip drop drip drop
Not a breath in the night
drip drop drip drop
Hunger fills the cold one's eyes
drip drop drip drop
Red coats it's fang glistening
drip drop drip drop
Blood falls where the cold on stalks
drip drop drip drop
RED RIVETS ALL AROUND
- by Twilighter_Till_Death |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/18/2008 |
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- Title: Red Rivets
- Artist: Twilighter_Till_Death
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Description:
This poem is kinda dark and creepy, it is just somin that i wrote.
HOPE U LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :mrgreen: - Date: 09/18/2008
- Tags: redrivetsblooddripdropvampire
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Ginta Girl - 01/12/2010
- cool
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- The Unfinished Story - 04/07/2009
- Just...wow!
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- Sailor Saturn of Darkness - 09/18/2008
- nice
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- X-x NitelySun x-X - 09/18/2008
- That is WAY awsome! But maybe add another line (so two lines) before every "drip drop drip drop" just to mix it up and so it's less confusing to the eyes and where we're reading
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- valenciadarkness - 09/18/2008
- woah...creepy! but good!
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- xXGlass_HeartsXx - 09/18/2008
- whoa.........this poem pwnz!!!!!!! 5/5!!!! ^~^
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- MeGa GaMe CrAzY 247 - 09/18/2008
- Yay,first comment!Go to my store!But I liked it.10/10
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