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I look in the mirror and
Loathe what I see
Because the person looking back
Will always be me.
- by dante arathos |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/14/2008 |
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- Title: Reflection
- Artist: dante arathos
- Description: well for a little while i went through a depression so this is one of the poems i came up with enjoy.
- Date: 09/14/2008
- Tags: reflection
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Comments (5 Comments)
- synnestry - 09/15/2008
- Great poem, at first I was thinking my my, this guy is depressed! Then I read your description, *whew*
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- Zen Maldita - 09/15/2008
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=w= *reads* the cause of writing such a lovely statement, depression perhaps?
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oh, you're description says...well! 5/5 XD - Report As Spam
- Helpline - 09/14/2008
- Well I gave you a 5/5 by mistake so you deserve it. Take it and I wish you luck =)
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- Argent Tirer - 09/14/2008
- That is so sad =/
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- Helpline - 09/14/2008
- This one is kind of plain it needs more than one line per stanza and you might want to add more it is a good poem and it does flow good but you need to take extra steps into making it a masterpiece. =) 2/5
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