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Stars
A dark quiet night
With a small burning light
Way up in the atmosphere
I look, and find they are so pure
A twinkle in the velvet night
So beautiful and bright!
They are so elegant and free
What is beauty, I look up and see
They are a song in the evening
I strain my ears to hear them sing
Dawn appears they quietly sigh
Tis' a burning flame to burn on high..
- by MooonLightX_X |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/14/2008 |
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- Title: Stars
- Artist: MooonLightX_X
- Description: i wrote this sometime...
- Date: 09/14/2008
- Tags: stars
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Comments (3 Comments)
- preppybecca - 09/16/2008
- i luv it
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- Endthesensation - 09/15/2008
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Very Well Written.
I Only Saw One Thing.
In The Third And Fourth Stanza Atmosphere And Pure Do Not Ryhm. Other Than That Very Nice. 4/5 - Report As Spam
- Anbu Ichigo Youso - 09/14/2008
- -claps- Very nice, and pretty too! I can't rhym as much as I used too. I love it 5/5!
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