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Sometimes I wonder, if I will ever be able to trust
If I will ever be able to open up to anyone ever again
Sometimes I wonder if my deepest thoughts
Or even my most cherished wishes, will ever come true
Sometimes I just think
Will I ever love again?
Will I ever trust again?
Will I ever open up again?
Will my dreams come true?
I ask these questions excepcting answers
But then again, only time will tell
- by Rose Mason |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/12/2008 |
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- Title: Time Will Tell
- Artist: Rose Mason
- Description: So I have been going through hard times where I ask questions about the future, but I could never really tell what it would be like, only time will...
- Date: 09/12/2008
- Tags: time will tell
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Comments (5 Comments)
- chyeahh the great - 04/24/2009
- i agree with atramentous snow... its a little raw.....it is repetative... it could be longer... it could possibly rhyme alittle and that could appeal to others... lyk i see where your coming frum here but you realyy need to remember that you cant write a poem and ask others not to criticise... it duzent work that way.... there is a lot of work to be done on your poem....
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- iEmoPopsicle - 09/13/2008
- nice 5/5 can you vote for me?
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- just Atra - 09/13/2008
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If you enter the arena, expect critisism.
It's not very original, and it's repetitive. - Report As Spam
- PruePower3 - 09/12/2008
- its OKAY...
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- Rose Mason - 09/12/2008
- It's brilliant! lol, I just think these pieces off of the top of my head so dont criticise them, they are from my life time emotions that just come out in unexplainable words
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