As the Last Leaf Falls

• Artist: Professor Grunge
• Description: I don't know why I wrote this, honestly.
  It just came to mind, slowly. Perhaps
  there is something in the back of my
  head, and it's just that depressing. >>
• Date: 09/11/2008
• Tags: untitled

The bell had just began to chime,
They were both running out of time.
It started to snow,
He called her name,
Regretting the days that he spent away.

She had been hurt,
Lying on the ground.
She could not speak,
could not hear a sound.
She started to cry,
As she slowly died;
With the vision of him
In the top of her mind.

He had said no, he walked away.
He was with someone new,
He knew not her name.
They walked and walked,
but then he stopped
he told her good-bye,
He felt in his heart
the one he loved died.

He ran and ran down the way,
Glancing around while calling her name.
He found her lying, on the ground
Covered with snow, and with no sound.

As she laid dying,
He held her while crying
He whispered "I love you,"
She passed away
The last leaf was falling
She faded away.

Comments

[luvgurl15]

i love it!!
5/5

[Professor Grunge]

Last leaf was falling =
It's between winter and fall.
There is snow, and one leaf left on the tree.
When she dies, the last leaf falls of of the branch. :3

[rockgirl2012]

i liked it a lot i guess it is just me but i kinda like poems such as this one.

[xXxXxbabexXxXx]

uh..........ooooooookay?

the whole last leaf was falling thing didnt really make much since to me.............but wutevr

anyway good job..not many grammer errors, so job well done

[misfitxmari]

wow..
thats..
idk
cant really say

[Professor Grunge]

>> Yup.