And Then You Were Gone

• Artist: Simply Rainie
• Description: Just a little poem I wrote about my friend.
• Date: 08/14/2008
• Tags: gonefeelingsforgotten

In times of need
You were not there
My seaching eyes
Found you no where
I seeked you
But you did not come
I called your name
You turned
But you did not see
I reached for your hand
But you were too far
My gasping breath
Calling your name
My efforts in vain
My sorrow deep
You were there
And then you were gone

Comments

[Eno_Crux]

wow, you must've been stuck in a crowd of tall people

joking, it's really good though 5/5

[Mud99]

1CAPTAIN PLANET!!!!!!!/out of 5

[lI_Ghost_lI]

Very nice. It paints a very elaborate picture. 5/5

[iiLil_emo_PuppeTii]

ohh ^-^ it was very good!
i liked it!!