- stare life is annoying should u take the path of light or darkness u may be light but end up dark in the end so the fire of hell and heaven u can go up or down life will show u the way and it will always but most people do is follow there heart and there have gone 2 the place of goodness and a safe world biggrin smile heart
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- | Submitted on 08/09/2008 |
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- Title: life
- Artist: Lord sora101
- Description: my way of life
- Date: 08/09/2008
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- Farrelei - 12/24/2008
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Where's your structure? Chat-spak in writing Arenas? No.
I'm sorry but this is horrible. There is no art involved or even effort placed into this poem.
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