i hate...

• Artist: miniplenty
• Description: A bitter contemporary poem... it feels a bit incomplete, but I liked playing around with combining words together to create multiple ways to read it.
• Date: 08/08/2008
• Tags: lesbian hate contemporary miniplenty

i hate straight people
the way they makeup most of the population
soone can chase the other
with reasonable certainty
that sooner or later one
will desire an exchange of bodily fluids
and settle forthe other

i hate valentines day
where straight people frolic
holding hands snuggling kissing
in public
and as they hand each other
heart shaped chocolates
(the symbolic heart shape
not the anatomicalone)
i lose my
homo appetite

i havent been yet but i know
ill hate the senior prom
whether i gothere by myself or in agroup
more heterosexual mating rituals
more opportunity to hate everything about me
i wouldnt even have fun
if i was there with someone i loved
because id still only be there
because itwas expected

Comments

[Kiki Kitsune33]

I`m gay, but I don`t hate straight people. But I can relate a bit, it is kind of bitter, especially when it`s the majority of people who are straight... 5/5

[sublime_necromancer]

I'd say it needs editing...spelling wise. You should keep writing (if this piece was just something random, I mean). I'm bi...though I didn't show it back in highschool (in college now)...though I had my eye out for a couple of guys...there was this really smart, cool guy at my old highschool that everyone knew he was gay, and he didn't care; he was my beacon about feeling okay about it...though I still didn't tell anyone until I graduated.

[Sweet_Papaya]

Umm... do you really hate straight people? That's harsh... o_O But, I guess it was a good poem, so 4/5

[W0LFIE x3]

cool