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You tell me your problems
I listen
You ask for advice
I give it
You ask for favors
I do them
When you cry
I comfort
But when I cry
You walk off to your
Other friends
When I need advice
Your not there
When I try to tell you my problems
You start to listen but then run off
I ask for favors
You don't listen
You didn't even care that my friend finally got caught
You won't admit it's the social workers and not police
You only care about you and your friend
And how he saw you
And operation armadiller
And how you like 3 guys
It's always about you!
- by cutekawaiikoneko |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/02/2008 |
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- Title: Sadness
- Artist: cutekawaiikoneko
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Description:
I wrote this because I was upset at a friend. It has been nominated by these poem people because I sent it into a contest. I would Like to know what you all think.
No it doesn't rhyme. It's not supposed to. - Date: 08/02/2008
- Tags: sadness
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Comments (4 Comments)
- CazzyxBear - 12/14/2008
- Kinda confusing. Is your friend who was caught and their friend the same person or no? Otherwise very nice but not the best. keep writing, 3/5
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- Agentmo0n - 12/13/2008
- This is sad, I am sorry! I feel your pain...girly hang in there.
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- SogniDeAnima - 12/12/2008
- ok, i can totally relate
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- rummie02 - 08/02/2008
- tahts sad im sorry
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