Love

• Artist: Little Miss EpicFail
• Description: I entered my art and I didn't do very good so I thought I could write a poem. I showed my mom and grandmother and they thought it was really good. If this one does well I will put in more because I do have a different one but I do not have it with me, but I think this one is still good. Comment and let me know how you like it!!!!
• Date: 07/31/2008
• Tags: lovekindsweetfromtheheart

My heart is here to stay.
I don't know what to say.
Today is the day.


All I can do is stare.
Love is in the air.
Ask him if you dare.


Don't have a fit.
And don't just sit.
your path is still lit.


fin biggrin

Comments

[CarefulSong]

So cute! Umm...yeah keep on trying! I know you'll be very good at poetry soon~

[Dudironimis]

1. the rythem is off
2. just cause it rhymes doesnt make it good
3. sounds alot like something i wrote in 2nd grade

[BETALOVER_96]

Ilike the rhyming

[mbourg99]

It's a little simplistic, but it's good. 3-4