I'm Gone

• Artist: LuckiWish
• Description: I wrote this song in seventh grade. I know it's not very good, but there's a few lines that I really like. I never even finished. "xD It lacks a bridge.
• Date: 07/27/2008
• Tags: gone done

It seems I owe you something more,
Since you opened up my door,
Even though I’m not sure you meant to.

But that was so long ago,
And I know not to mope,
Over things that have already been done.

You taught me all that I know,
I didn’t want to learn it, though.
You remind me I’m real.

Just one word, its over; done.
No more of that kiss and run.
So what are you doing back here?

I’m sorry, but there’s nothing to steal.
I thought we said it once and for real.

Hey, what you trying to prove?
There’s nothing left for you.
You took it all when I fell down.

What you trying to say?
Don’t matter anyway.
I’m already moving on.
I’m gone.

It’s hard to admit defeat,
But a good man knows when to retreat.
Boy, you ain't no good man.

But the things that I’m seeing,
Are hard to believe in,
But you turn them to real.

I tell you time and time again,
That you will never be my friend.
Whats fake to me is a game to you.

I’m sorry, but you’ve already stolen,
Everything that I call broken.

Hey, what you trying to prove?
There’s nothing left for you.
You took it all when I fell down.

What you trying to say?
Don’t matter anyway.
I’m already moving on.
I’m gone.

Comments

[Traveling_Memory]

Deep...its an awesome song/poem. Keep writing! =o

[Sincerely Metalhead]

for an unfinished song, that rocks...sure it could use some work, but other than that it is really good, i can see you finishing that and recording it and OMG FOOD!!! ok sorry...anywho, it is a pretty good song, i like it!