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Glory
If there were anything wrong with glory
It’s that it lasts forever naught
Pleasure comes and goes at will
And we all lose that we’ve sought
It is oft said that times like these
Come once in life and ne’er again
But the moment of bliss is worth
More than the remaining lives and pain
But what soul does carry such burden
To live but a moment of bliss
And tell every wandering traveler
Of things they shall forever miss
Beware, traveler of glory
I do tell you of the tale
Of the burden of glory’s touch
On a soul who shan’t prevail
One may try his hardest,
And ne’er give quitting a thought
Yet none shall forever feel glory
A feeling lay long forgot
Yet, again, once presented the offer
Of living one moment of joy
One must decide if it’s worth it
To take memories meant to destroy
For that is all the memories do
To the hero that once stood proud
They tear him down from the shoulders
That once refused to bow
Yet to be the hero of old
To know that glory once was grasped
Perhaps is the greatest glory of all
For it is the glory that lasts.
- by hopeless_dreams |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/21/2008 |
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- Title: Glory
- Artist: hopeless_dreams
- Description: So I started writing and then it kept going. Hope you like it.
- Date: 07/21/2008
- Tags: glory
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Comments (2 Comments)
- AninOnin - 07/21/2008
- I agree with Kitten. Very nice piece of work. 5 stars easy!
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- HUMIDIFIER - 07/21/2008
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there is one line that isn't with the rhythm at all: "But the moment of bliss is worth" but this is probably the best thing i've seen so far in this arena. i really like the rhythm at the beginning, and how it seems like you thought before you wrote, which is a lot more than some of these kids can say.
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