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Save me from insanity
save me from myself.
Save me from the broken world,
save me from this hell.
Shield me from all evils,
shield me from the flames.
Shield me from all worldly things,
shield me from all sin.
Free me from my burden,
free me from my pain.
Free me from these heavy weights,
free me from these chains.
- by Edward the Beloved |
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- | Submitted on 07/20/2008 |
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- Title: Save Me
- Artist: Edward the Beloved
- Description: Older Poem I had published in a collection of poetry book Surrender to the Moon. Also on my Deviantart page-- http://edward-the-beloved.deviantart.com/
- Date: 07/20/2008
- Tags: save shield free
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Comments (4 Comments)
- reapersuns manfriend - 07/20/2008
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Hmm... Reminds me of a song from Stabbing Westward called "Save Yourself".
Not bad, but like the song, it's emo. Emo isn't always a bad thing though. Just won't be a masterpiece later on. About 1/3 poets out there won't go big because they normally will write emo. Thus, it'll be overlooked. - Report As Spam
- Rozoko - 07/20/2008
- I like it. Even in the absence of rhyme, it still has a nice structure to it. It also tells of the crying of help to be free from pain long since torturing the soul of this poem. Well done. 5
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- Kekui - 07/20/2008
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this is really good!!!!
i can really relate to it too. - Report As Spam
- small kid_21054 - 07/20/2008
- this poem is really good
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