Dark Past For Eternity

• Artist: xmcrlover4everx
• Description: it used to be what i was allways thinking about. walking down a dark dead ally. and feeling people just thinking that maby they can have a better life. instead of hatride and lust always inside there minds and bodys. everyone in there life time gets used and jelouse its the way of life. but in the way i see it. its way different then people could ever imagine. there are lots of people that never move on or change. overall its a horibal way to live.
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: adeadbegining

Love Is So Blind, It Ends Up Leaveing Me, In Darkness For All Eternity In A Black Dead Ally, When All I Can Feel And Sence Is Hate, And Desirebal Grusome Lust, In Indiviguals, Haterid Devilish Eyes I Know, Sence, And Love.

Comments

[Miss Liza]

You need to work on spelling, punctuation, flow, tone, content.... etc

[Milkshake-in-a-Cup]

It's hard to get the feel of the poem as it's all in one sentence.
I like the meaning behind it and the poem itself. :]