• "Please...! Don't...!" screamed Sally terrified of what Oliver might do to her. "No! I--" Lets skip that part and go back, before all of this happened. It all started when Sally was in her room, doing homework. Same old same old. "Hmm.." said Sally thinking about what to do "Guess I'll go check my email and play a MMO.." Sally went onto Hotmail to check her email and had a weird email with the title: 'Watch Out' she read it. It was like this:
    "I know where you live Sally. I will kill you if I have to. You know too much already, about me, about your friends, about everything. If you don't watch your back or keep your nose out of other peoples business, you're going to make me kill you..."
    At the bottom, was the senders name, Oliver. Oliver was Sally's best guy-friend. They did everything together. Sally thought that Oliver got hacked or his friends got onto his computer and sent the email to her so she just deleted it without thinking that anything would happen. She was wrong. Something would happen. Very soon...

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    "OLIVER!!!" screamed Oliver's mom "WHAT THE HELL DO YOU WANT MOTHER?!" Oliver screamed back "DON'T YOU USE THAT LANGUAGE WITH ME YOUNG MAN NOW GET DOWN HERE AND HELP YOUR FATHER AND ME MOVE YOUR GOD DAMN PIANO UP TO YOUR ROOM!" Oliver's mother replied. Oliver went downstairs pouting. He always hated his mother. Only his father understood him. Oliver was born into a rich family, just like his best friend Sally. He considered asking Sally out one day, but, couldn't get the courage. Ever since, his mother has been bitching twice as much, and, it seems like that she thinks that he is gay. Oliver always loved fashion, but that doesn't mean he's gay. Oliver hardly helped moved the piano, he only had his hands on the side not evan holding it. His hands where only touching the piano. Once the piano was up in Oliver's room his mom started to b***h again "GET OFF YOUR a** AND GO GET A GIRLFRIEND!" she screamed "I WILL WHEN I'M READY!" Oliver screamed back and left the house to go to Sally's. Little did he know, something interesting was going to happen...

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    Well, thats the end of part one everyone... sweatdrop Please comment on how I can improve it and if you think I should make a second part. Thanks to all that comment and give me feedback! =)