Roxi Storme's Past

• Artist: II Roxanne II
• Description: Roxi was 12 years old but now is 14 years old she was finally going to meet her mother again it scared her to death she was also happy about it to but the lies her step father told her she had started to sorta believe......
• Date: 10/31/2009
• Tags: roxi stormes past

As Roxi Stormed Into The Night She was carrying her suitcase and bags she wasn't going to stay here be threatened by her step-father her mother had been sepreated from her when her parents out into a fight she was only 12 years old when that had happened but now she was on her way to finally meet her mother after all these years she was now 14 years old and her hair had gotten darker red she was staring out a window on a train gazing into the mountin side she was scared she hadn't seen her mother in a long time after that night she was happy that she found her but her step father had told her lies she was mad at him and she always was threatened by him she was glad when when she left it made her strong on the inside turned her gaze from the mountin to the ceiling and sighed and closed her eyes trying to calm herself down.

Comments

[Thorn Of The Sky]

I agree with sohisohi.You could have done a lot more with this,good plot line,but weak story.

[GothicPrincessTifa]

i think you did an amazing job wow.i have to tell some people to read this.5/5

[Sohisohi]

I think you could have done alot more with this. The way you worded it kinda skipped around. You had a good Idea but I think you sould expand on it.