Daydreamer

• Artist: Ur Lovely Nightmare Aira
• Description: This is the introduction part of my story. If you like it, please let me know so that I can continue or switch gears to a different story.
• Date: 07/12/2009
• Tags: daydreamer

*~Prelude~*

Please excuse me if what I am about to say comes to you as rushed and curtailed.
You see, I'm in a coma right now. Many people call this an 'out of person experience,' though I'm unsure if this is really the appropriate situation for that...
The man in the corner asleep in the blue chair is my dad.
The young woman on the bed, is me. My name is Aina, and if you can hear me out there, please, listen to my story. Perhaps recapping is what I need to do to try to remember how I got here, and who, or what, may have caused it..

Comments

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It draws me in. Keep going with this story.

[yingying1234]

I like it. It gives the feeling that a good story is about to take place.

[Alexrose1]

Not bad a really intresting prelude

[Nanashi Toramizu]

Realy good, but you should add more desciptions to the characters so wecan feel lik we can almost see them. But it realy is good.

[omch]

cool