tragedies of the dead awake

• Artist: dead_alive21
• Description: these are just a few of my feelings towards life and whatnot. comment, pleeez!
• Date: 07/06/2009
• Tags: tragedies dead awake

she feels dead. she's lying on the floor of a cold and empty room. cold and empty just like her. she doesn't feel like herself. she's confused and lost. she's lost. she's broken. nothing makes sense. she can't feel anything anymore, except the the cold...and the emptyness. she's standing on the edge, ready to turn herself in to whatever comes after life. scars on her wrists and water in her eyes. there's no point in jumping, her soul already left her body. she just needs a way to leave this world and fast.

Comments

[Kairi Bitches]

It's very deep and emotional which is good. But you use "she" too much, and you should have capitalized and used punctuation. It would have looked better.

[nasugi]

awesome! 5 stars.
but uh... a little emo...