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“YOU LITTLE VERMIN!!” a Demon yelled at Iratu and Sakido
“You…you…*cough cough* You want to hurt me son even more? DO YOU?”
“MURDERERS! I’LL KILL YOU!!” The Demon shouted, blood dripping form it’s mouth and with firey red eyes.
The Demon lunged at Iratu and Sakido, with it’s claws unsheathed.
Iratu and Sakido were crying like they never would, with fear they would die.
“What the hell!?” The Demon said as his claw hit a yellow barrier around the children.
“Get away from them.” Darius said, furious. “Get away from my children!”
- by DarklingJunior |
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- | Submitted on 12/20/2008 |
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- Title: Darius's Diary - BuwaroPg3
- Artist: DarklingJunior
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Description:
The diary of a young Angel named Darius
BuwaroPg3 - Tears of Death - Date: 12/20/2008
- Tags: dariuss diary buwaropg3
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Comments (1 Comments)
- sugarsweetooth - 12/21/2008
- pretty good. I like the words youv'e used like unsheathed and the use of the characters names. To improve maybe you could put even a bit more information like "He looked at the monster, fear in his eyes, he would be surprised if he was to manage to get out alive". But alltogether. I like it.
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