Dear Tragedy.

• Artist: Lady Emergency
• Description: I've been looking for some feedback on this one, actually. I wrote it in a WC and really liked it, but I'm not sure how everyone else would thing. I am not to judge my own artwork, society does that for me. BUTWHATEVER. Just tell me what you think, and I'll be your best friend forever.
  Also, this is not like my normal poetry style AT ALL. I'll post some of my mother poetry tomorrroowww.
• Date: 11/30/2008
• Tags: dear tragedy

Broken-hearted tragedy,
Sing me a lullaby,
Write me a comedy,
Dear tragedy,
Show me your secrets,
Allow me to see,
What you do.

Blood-spangled tragedy,
Paint me a picture,
Tell me of murder,
Thrill of the hunt,
Taste of the blade,
Dear tragedy,
Whisper to me,
Write me your story.

Stage-curtained tragedy,
Let me hear the love,
Allow me upon your stage,
I want to see the last curtain,
As it falls for the show,
Will you allow me,
Dear tragedy,
To see all your cast?
To walk like the stars do?

Show me,
Dear tragedies,
All that you've seen,
Paint me pictures in blood,
Sing me lullabies,
Pull the last curtain,
Will you,
Dear tragedies?

Comments

[goldenheart8]

Not in the correct section, but love it. biggrin

[party-kiki259]

luv it 4/5

[zox-emo-roxas-xoz]

This should be in the poetry and lyrics section, not fiction. This isn't a story.
It wasn't too bad, I guess, just kind of depressing. You defiantly did the right form (free verse).

[Bragi Wilhelm]

This is in the wrong place. I just thought I should let you know.

[SEXIACilla]

I like this its really differt and i like how you are asking tragdey a ton of questions and how you are detailed you are.
my favotie part was.....
Stage-curtained tragedy,
Let me hear the love,
Allow me upon your stage,
I want to see the last curtain,
As it falls for the show,
Will you allow me,
Dear tragedy,
To see all your cast?
To walk like the stars do?
sorry this is such a long post comment thing
keep writing an i'd love to see more!!