Belong

• Artist: Justmeliving
• Description: A short love story.
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: love band tour

It's the band you ALWAYS dreamed of, you and your crush in a band together dating. You're the guitar and he's the voice. He write's songs about not being able to tell someone he likes. Untill one day you're on your tour bus and asks you a simple but random question,"Do you like anybody right now?" and of course you nod your head very nervously. And then you blurt out in a whisper " Yeah I like you..." then he sings you the most romantic song on the guitar to you. Some tears weld up and then he says at the end of the song I love you and you finally feel like you belong...you're in love

Comments

[xxkakenutsxx]

Details are everything. And where's the hook? Like she can't be with him because she's worried that if they break up the band will split????

[Kai Metaku]

it seams like a theme?

[Aranea Lilium]

This is like one of those quizilla love stories. =

You should put more thought and detail into this. It has great potential, you should write more to it and then post it. This is more like an outline of the story rather than the story itself.

Like I said you should put more detail into it mkay? =]

[xiaoyu_amy]

What the heck? That was pretty random...

[Jana Kennedy]

its not very long and its not that gd.
it doesn't thrill me. i wouldn't want to read it again

[lifesux23]

eh it dosnt seem to real to me, and it lacks details but it has potential try to write a full story line

[xSEPTUSx]

it's not horrible...just maybe a little un-realistic... but I guess that's where the fiction comes in, right? ^_^