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- | Submitted on 06/17/2012 |
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- Title: Angel Knight from The Earth
- Artist: kay harahap
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Description:
actually, she is an angel falling down to the earth. why? because she is lose from devil by devil trick. but she promise after she get new pair wing. she will take revenge to devil, who's cut her wing last moment. she can't see earth-land because she feel like a normal human then she cry with her blood. she is smile because her happy.---> she can feel like human at the moment.
sorry about my horrible english
thanks - Date: 06/17/2012
- Tags: angel knight from earth
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Comments (3 Comments)
- iStealYerCookies - 06/18/2012
- (cont.) If she fell like a normal human, then how would she still be alive? Why would she be crying tears of blood? And what on Earth would she be happy about at this moment? It's good that you have White and Gold in there, but it should be more elegant rather than looking like she's in warrior armor. 2/5
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- iStealYerCookies - 06/18/2012
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I did not like the story. The english wasn't a problem, I understood what you were trying to say just fine, but the back story and outfit just don't work. You said she fell to the Earth because she was tricked by the devil, and once she gets a new pair of wings, she will have vengeance on the devil. That's what I understood from the story, but why cut off a wing at the last moment? What was the trick?
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- kay harahap - 06/17/2012
- can you touch your star (rate) for my avi?
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